Our video after audience feedback

QUESTION 3 - Audience and feedback
This is our new video after recieving audience feedback. We have now made the improvment which we thought would benefit the video from the critism from the feedback. We changed the track to an instrumental version so you could hear the dialouge better over, because of this we added a title card which meant we could still gain narrative from the song. Hopefully most of our target audience would reconise the song because it is the charts and popular so they would understand the title card.
An improvement suggestion which we received in our feedback would be to match the time cards up to the beats of the music more, because some of them are slightly off. The titles cards matching the music is a common convention of soap trailers so this is something we hope to achieve in our edited video.

Audience feedback 
Some quotes from the viewers "I would definatly watch this after the trailer" "the instrumental music is too loud, I prefered the old trailer" "I don't think instrumental works as well" "The shot angles are very good, I would definatly watch this programme "

Improvements
Unfortunatly using the instrumental versoin of the song didn't seem very popular so we hope to change this back in the next edit of our video, next time we will have to be careful with the editing so it matches up and there are no sudden cuts in the song. Also because we have vocals in the song to create a narrative again there won't be any need for the opening title card. Because Florences voice is so distinctive we will turn down the music and some of the dialogue up so it stands out more agaisnt the track.

The audience feedback has helped because it has let us understand more about trial and error. To make a product perfect you have to try different things, even if they don't work, to make it perfect.